Thursday, 28 May 2015

Explanation writing

My chosen career path is a Vet. The reason I want to be a Vet is that I want to help and save animals. Vets treat sick and injured animals they also care animals. You need to prevent and treat animal problems and diseases. They also examine dead animals to find the cause of the death.I will also advise on animal nutrition and care for animals.

reading prove it

 WALT explore the authors purpose

For me to achieve my reading goal I have to do some reading follow up worksheets from my breakout.

In the first box you have to write PIE witch means Persuasive,Inform and Entertain and choose witch one you think it is from reading the text. Explain why you think that.

The second box you have to write the point of view agree,disagree or neutral and why you think that.

The third box is to identify what the intended audience is ( like you are talking about someone who likes something 
mainly you are talking about the main speaker.

Then the last box is an overall statement 
Overall.......because...........because 

I think I am at relalational because I can do the sheet myself but sometimes I might need help.

Tuesday, 26 May 2015

                              MY GOALS


My goals from term 1 have been going okay because I am not going very well on getting my excellence  but I feel like i'm doing a  bit better in my writing

Wednesday, 13 May 2015

                              NEGATIVE   NUMBERS




_________________________________________________________________________________
          -15            -12           ___           -6            -3           ___          3           6


answer:      -9         0

 

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             -40             -30            __            -10               0                10               20         ___        ___








answer:      -20         30       40










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     __         -30           __          -22          __         -14         -10            -6          -2       __       6






answer:     -34       -26       -18         2

Wednesday, 6 May 2015

My Chocolate Poem

CHOCOLATE

Dark delicious chocolate jumped into my hand. My hands were boiling after a million km run.Thats when the chocolate melted as fast as a flowing waterfall. OH NO! Now I need some more chocolate!Image result for chocolate bar




I think that I am at the multistructional stage because I included several  strategies in my poem but am unsure when and why to use them.